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Tina Fagan's avatar

That is so beautiful

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Matthewbythames's avatar

Your words, Debbie, glisten much like the droplet itself—held in a moment of beauty before surrendering to something greater. This reflection came to me as I read your poem.

Poised on the edge, your words remain,

a quiet truth in liquid form.

A moment held—then given freely,

to quench, to mirror, to be reborn.

Is it longing, or is it grace,

this falling meant for earth’s embrace?

Do we not all, in time, descend

to blend with love, to find our end?

Yet even so, the cycle spins,

a droplet lost, a life begins.

No parting truly means goodbye—

only the turning of the sky.

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